Thursday, January 21, 2016

"Week 1 Storytelling:There was an old woman."

There was an old woman had three sons,
          Jerry, and James, and John:
          Jerry was hung, James was drowned,
          John was lost and never was found,
          And there was an end of the three sons,
          Jerry, and James, and John!


There was an old woman named Elizabeth, who loves to sleep with her sneaky cat sitting on her shoulder while staring at her face. She also had three sons, Jerry, James, and John, for whom she never cared.

(The sleep old woman: photo by Libiotto)


One day, Jerry, James, and John decide to leave their home, town, city and the world, without telling their mother, who never loved them. The kids deprived of their mother's love started hating their lives and felt as if they were useless. Before leaving, Jerry, James, and John planned to eat a dinner for the last time, where they cooked a lot of delicious food together. They had a lot of fun cooking. After eating three of them departed in different directions while their eyes full of sorrow.


An 1865 political cartoon depicting Benedict Arnold and Jefferson Davis in Hell. Source:Wikipedia
 

Jerry was hung, James was drowned,
   John was lost and never was found,

Since Jerry, James, and John had a strong feeling of love for each other. Not after very long, Jerry hung himself and committed suicide because for him life was pointless without his brothers.
(Swinging corpse silhouette:Wikimedia Commons)


On the other side, James had the same condition like Jerry. He did not want to live a lonely life. As he was walking through an unknown place, he saw a river and drowned himself, while yelling  "Jerry, and John I cannot live without you guys."
(Houdini swims above Niagara Falls in a scene from
The Man from Beyond (1922)
. Source:Wikipedia)



Lastly, John, who was the youngest of three and was unaware of the real world because Jerry and James always led him through the difficulties of life. John had no idea of where to go. So, John went straight into the road where his brothers left him and no one knows where he went there after.

(Walled Garden, Lydiard Park and House, Lydiard Tregoze, Swindon:photo by Brian Robert Marshall)




And there was an end of the three sons,
          Jerry, and James, and John!

When Elizabeth woke up from her sleep, she looked for her sons, but it was too late and her sons were gone forever. She realized their importance in her life when she had no one to talk to or yell at. From that day Elizabeth never slept again.

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There was an old woman had three sons,
          Jerry, and James, and John:
          Jerry was hung, James was drowned,
          John was lost and never was found,
          And there was an end of the three sons,
          Jerry, and James, and John!

Author's note: The story is about an old woman and her three sons, Jerry, and James, and John, but without any background or detail. My story is descriptive and detailed compared to the original source. All you know from original rhyme is that there is an old woman and three sons, addition to how their lives came to an end.
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Bibliography. This story is based on the nursery rhyme "There was an old woman" in The Nursery Rhyme Book, edited by Andrew Lang (1897).

4 comments:

  1. Wow, this is a very sad story. I think you did a great job embellishing on the short nursery rhyme. It is a wonderful example of the importance of love in your life, for without love all three brothers took their own lives, and when the mother realized she too was without love, she never slept again. In this case, no one had a happy ending.

    Thanks for sharing!

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  2. I liked how you separated story about Jerry, John and James into three different paragraphs. It was very descriptive and easy to follow. Overall, a great read! You did a great job converting a nursery rhyme to a story. Even though it had a very sad ending for all the characters, it did have a very valuable moral where value of life and loved ones in our life comes into our mind.

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  3. You did a great job of writing for each of the boys. I like that John’s story kind of tied everything together. When I was searching for rhymes, a lot of them were sad like this one. Props to you for using one and actually making it work! I also really liked that you included a lot of photos to help tell the story!

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  4. You did a great job on making this story interesting. Wow, this was really sad. Breaking up the brothers into their own paragraph was a good idea. The picture of the first brother really put a visual prospective on the story for me. It made me understand just how lonely the remaining brothers were going to feel before I even read ahead. It just goes to show the value of family support. Thanks for sharing!

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